kaa
kaa

Finally wrote my third article on RMO, Physical, Digital & Mind. I’m mindful of sharing this at the moment as I’m still working through it all, but feedback is important to me at this early stage.

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vanessa
vanessa

@kaa Interesting. A few grammatical tweaks; missing words, apostrophes.

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kaa
kaa

@vanessa Ha, good catch(es). Went back and updated :).

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vanessa
vanessa

@kaa No probs. These things tend to jump out at me - except in my own writing, of course. Always feel a bit mean pointing them out, but I know I'd rather be told than not, so have to hope that applies to others, too.

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kaa
kaa

@vanessa I absolutely apprecaite the feedback. I've been sitting on this for a while now and decided to just pull the trigger and keep moving as my thoughts on this subject are still nascent.

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