jgmac1106
jgmac1106

Waning fire
 of
 smoldering ashes
darkening skies
in
 dances
falling silent
 as I lose myself
    in your eyes of
destiny’s broken
desire
  forgotten stains
unseen in
   surrendering
embers
#smallpoems
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pimoore
pimoore

@jgmac1106 Really great, well done!

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jgmac1106

@pimoore Wow. thanks, bunch of us hang on on smallpowems and the clmooc webring, welcome to join us, I should add micro.blog site to the ring.

I want to change the two uses of darkens...Kinda an unwritten rule of mine not to use a word twice unless planned device.

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pimoore
pimoore

@jgmac1106 Where’s the #smallpoems group and clmooc webring you mentioned?

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jgmac1106
jgmac1106

@pimoore dangnnit, now fire and deasire too far apart and that's the the whole mirror bending in on itself...grrrr dust left unsettled always paints better pictures that history's streaks

This is the webring: clmoocring.jgregorymcverry.com it shouldn't be attached to my ID (my url is) but I set it up for us when Google+ crumbled at an IndieWebCamp.

Keep meaning to move it to clmooc.com so more our We(s) than my Me(s) just time erodes walls of intentions in stones of forgotten webmentions

The CLMOOC webring has a strange history. Easy to see in any time web ring can get a notification to ding in the present tense.

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