My takeaway from todays morning page session: ChatGTP is still better at writing dialogs then I :-D On the left is a paragraph of text I wrote and on the right how ChatGTP proposes to change it.
It is eye opening. And I did not copy and past back the new version verbatim.
@V_ On the contrary, I think the “corrected” version is stodgy, formulaic and old-fashioned. Yours, though rough, has character that I would not sandpaper off.
@dwalbert, thanks a lot for your feedback! I will look out not to sandpaper off anything. In retrospect, I should have also mentioned the negative parts of the proposal. The bot completely changed the POV (first person) and the tense.
The wow factor for me was splitting it up into dialogs, and it looked like something I would see in a typeset book. My general issue is that my sentences are always too long. Especially the ones for Mia (she’s supposed to be eight years old).